tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138618889224689815.post6066969522145721382..comments2024-02-03T10:15:47.764-08:00Comments on Male Stripping 101: More Concept Book Covers For Upcoming BookDion McTavishhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06979553545633614804noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138618889224689815.post-76838757025444176772014-06-20T20:34:05.551-07:002014-06-20T20:34:05.551-07:00I love them all. Very eye grabbing, I dont think y...I love them all. Very eye grabbing, I dont think you can wrong with any of themAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138618889224689815.post-26785437017826015212014-06-19T04:26:04.222-07:002014-06-19T04:26:04.222-07:00Thanks for the feedback everyone. Thanks for the feedback everyone. Dion McTavishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06979553545633614804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138618889224689815.post-24612715544343794462014-06-19T04:25:53.686-07:002014-06-19T04:25:53.686-07:00Removing "Bare Bones" out. The final pro...Removing "Bare Bones" out. The final product will be a combination of the best traits of #1 and #3. Dion McTavishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06979553545633614804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138618889224689815.post-77521311188843972082014-06-18T17:04:28.516-07:002014-06-18T17:04:28.516-07:00I like the colors of #1 but the title of #3. A &q...I like the colors of #1 but the title of #3. A "bare bones" guide to me means it is just the minimum, nothing more. Bare bones means cheap to me, not a reference to stripping. I like the way the images are arranged in the first cover. #3 looks like a textbook to me. I would look at other colors for the title text so that it shows up well when reduced to a thumbnail. #2 is good, too, but I would not use gray text because it will hard to see in a thumbnail. Overall, I pick graphics from #1 with title from #3. Johnnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138618889224689815.post-5973033270803827492014-06-18T16:21:03.172-07:002014-06-18T16:21:03.172-07:00Thanks for the comments everyone. I sent them all ...Thanks for the comments everyone. I sent them all to the illustrator. Might tweak a few things, but I think we're going to narrow it down now. Dion McTavishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06979553545633614804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138618889224689815.post-65471452753614147722014-06-18T09:26:12.509-07:002014-06-18T09:26:12.509-07:00I vote #1I vote #1Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138618889224689815.post-47025785217879850642014-06-18T09:05:26.790-07:002014-06-18T09:05:26.790-07:00Seems like you should clear it with people who'...Seems like you should clear it with people who's faces are visibleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138618889224689815.post-14013288910845113852014-06-18T07:15:33.207-07:002014-06-18T07:15:33.207-07:00Number 3, definitely. Colorful and clearly formatt...Number 3, definitely. Colorful and clearly formatted. One thing to think about though, when you're selling ebooks, you want a cover that looks good at thumbnail size. You might want to englarge the title of the 3rd one a bit. I wouldn't think you particularly need the word "bare bones" in there, either.English Teacher Xhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16566898470803597937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138618889224689815.post-18793757555883322282014-06-18T07:01:18.805-07:002014-06-18T07:01:18.805-07:00I like the logo in the second image. I think it is...I like the logo in the second image. I think it is both clear and fun. <br /><br />The subtitle section needs a bit of work though, That 's' shape is just to visually busy.<br /><br />As for the subtitle itself, I think that shorter is better so use" Dion's Guide to Becoming a Male Stripper"<br /><br />And speaking of visually busy, I think the collage is just too much. You are better off going with a single cover image,Nemohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04939249767970811717noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4138618889224689815.post-27299076831044008582014-06-18T06:56:04.719-07:002014-06-18T06:56:04.719-07:00First, I do like the logo in the second image, it...First, I do like the logo in the second image, it's fun and eye catching, <br />The subtitle section is a bit visually busy. <br /><br />As for the subtitle itself: I think that shorter is better. I would go with "Dion's Guide to Becoming a Male Stripper"<br /><br />The same goes for the collage image; it's just too distracting. A single cover image would be much better.Nemohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04939249767970811717noreply@blogger.com